Talk:Laerdon/@comment-4707607-20130207230755

Okay, first off, I suggest throwing in more hotlinks, for example where all the regions are listed, make those hotlinks to the pages of those regions.

Furthermore, I dont know what Southridge is, its not in the list of regions, nor is it on the map. Make sure that any needed information is given or easily accessible. Actually, I dont know what any of the ridges are...

In the Gardor sub-category, you dont need to explain what the Aidothi are like, since that information belongs on their own page, so instead there should be a hotlink to the Aidothi page.

The Silverglade sub-category has a spelling error (arnoud should be around)

About Avalon: It states how it is in Orc possession, however in the description/history the last thing it says is how it was taken by an alliance of three nations of men. (And Aidothi and Dwarves)

And finally, Allthond has a spelling error as well: Northridgee should be Northridge.

But most important is to add hotlinks (Thats the appeal of a wiki, and makes it easy to access information)